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Risk Taking


In our lives, it is important to exercise self-command. However, we
should not be so concerned with the future that we stifle the present. The
question becomes what balance should we strike between self-command and risks?
What kinds of risks are acceptable or unacceptable? In this essay, we will use
two examples of risks to show the distinction between the two and arrive at a
conclusion as to the balance one should have between risk and self command. The
first example we will use is of a person who spends his life savings on a
lottery ticket and does not win the lottery. The second is of a person who
spends his life savings on a hunch regarding a cure for AIDS, a hunch that is
false. Before we make this distinction, however, it is necessary to define the
terms acceptable and unacceptable risks.

Acceptable and Unacceptable Risks

There are several ways in which one could define which risks are
acceptable. One could say, for example, that the only acceptable risk is one
for which the odds of success are greater than the odds of failure. Another
definition of acceptable risk might be a risk that does not harm one's future.
We might also say that the only acceptable risk is one where the aggregate
happiness is increased, thus increasing the moral good of the risk, an idea
which is based on John Stuart Mill's Utilitarianism. Finally, we might define a
morally good risk in a Kantian way by saying that the only acceptable risk is
one which is rationally thought out (Thomas, lecture).
Now that we have several definitions of acceptable risks, we may ask how
these definitions, which seem piecemeal and unrelated, can all combine to form
one definition of acceptable risk. The best way to do this is to examine the
two cases that lie before us and relate the definitions to them. In the process
of doing so, we will determine which risk is acceptable and which is not.

Risks in the example: the lottery and the AIDS cure

If the average person on the street were presented with the case of
spending one's life savings on a lottery ticket and losing or spending the same
sum on a false hunch regarding an AIDS cure, he or she would probably come up
with several answers. For the most part though, all the answers would be
consistent with one idea: the AIDS cure is simply "worth" more and thus is a
more acceptable risk. There might be several reasons for this. One could
assume, for example, that the only person who would attempt to cure AIDS would
be a doctor with sufficient experience in the field. It would follow, then,
that the odds of finding a cure for AIDS would be much greater than the odds of
winning the lottery. To win the lottery, one has to draw 6 numbers out of 46 (a
probability that is very low). However, curing AIDS with medical experience is
a less risky endeavor. In this instance, trying to cure AIDS would be a
greater moral good because it is less risk involved in it than in trying to win
the lottery. This case, although quite valid, is not very interesting. In fact,
we have solved it rather rapidly. The more interesting case, and the one we
will consider in depth here, is the case in which one has no medical experience
whatsoever, but still attempts to find a cure. Furthermore, we will set the odds
such that one has a better chance of winning the lottery than finding a cure for
AIDS. Yet, I will still show that, regardless of the greater chance of failure,
the attempt at an AIDS cure is still has more moral worth than the purchase of
the lottery ticket, even though both result in failure.
Why does the spending one's life savings on an AIDS cure have more moral
worth (which makes it a more acceptable risk) than spending the same sum on a
lottery ticket, when the numerical odds of being successful are the same? Why
bother, since in the end, the result is the same? The answer lies in Mill's
definition of a moral good, that which is done to increase the common happiness
(Mill, Utilitarianism). The AIDS cure is something that will increase the common
happiness, while a person winning the lottery generally will only increase his
or her happiness. This is almost obvious. Certainly, if I was to win the
lottery, I would increase my happiness greatly, but the increase in the general
happiness would be negligible. However, if I were to find a cure for AIDS, it
would greatly increase the general happiness. Masses of suffering people and
their loved ones would be much happier. Even though my attempt was unsuccessful,
it would still be greatly appreciated. Just the thought of a cure would have
given hope to what could otherwise be a bleak existence. The mere possibility
of being saved from an almost certain death would increase several victims'
happiness. We see this today, when, each time a new drug that delays the
progression of AIDS is approved, people flock to it. That such things are not
cures and that some of them do not offer guarantees (indeed, many are
experimental) is almost insignificant. People still try them. Why? Because
they offer a hope of continuing what humans treasure most: life. Similarly, my
AIDS cure would offer some hope to patients who are assured an eventual long,
painful death. Maybe the cure might work for them. If not, that it did not
would be almost insignificant. Spending my life's savings on an AIDS cure would
almost certainly increase the general happiness, as it would provide hope. That,
in the end, it is a failure is of little, if any, significance.



 

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#1 (permalink) Fri Nov 29, 2013 6:35 am   Essay: Successful people take risks. Please comment. 

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Answer:
Most of people avoid taking risks and they just try doing things which they already know how to do well. On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, the successful people are quite different with ordinary people, they take risks and try new things in order to gain profit and achieve their goals.
First of all, trying to do new things give people opportunity to find new ways which are different with traditional things. Without changing the method of leaving and trying new things people cannot improve their conditions. For example, Columbus is a man how tried to go to the India by a different way and he discovered new continent. If he took the ordinary path as other sailors he could not reach this great success. Nowadays, we can see new modern computers, cell-phones and other inventions which help to improve the quality of living. Scientists and researchers use new and different ways to find new things and methods which can open new horizons in people’s life.
Second, taking and trying new methods and new things are not always safe. We can find several examples of pioneers which endangered their life when tried to find new things or new methods. Marie Curie was a successful scientists, who discovered the radioactive element (Uranium) which made a huge development in sciences. She exposed herself and her husband in front of the radioactive rays without knowing which gave them cancer and they died by this disease. On the other hand, without taking the risk of trying new thing people cannot find new ways and cannot understand the advantages or disadvantages of new things. However, the successful people take this risk which the ordinary people do not.
As a conclusion, trying new things give this opportunity to successful people to find out new horizons in their way to reach their goal and trying new ways are not safe all the time but without taking the risk of trying new things they cannot discover new ways. The successful people pay the risk of endangering themselves in order to get the advantage of finding new things which the ordinary people do not do this.

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#2 (permalink) Fri Nov 29, 2013 7:22 am   Essay: Successful people take risks. Please comment. 

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#3 (permalink) Fri Nov 29, 2013 16:11 pm   Re: Essay: Successful people take risks. Please comment. 

Hi Saman, I thought your essay was pretty good. You have addressed the prompt well and given some detailed examples to support your points. Your introduction was a little too basic, but your body paragraphs were better developed. You did have quite a few minor errors in grammar and preposition choice and your vocabulary is pretty basic, with a lot of repetitive words. Overall, I would rate this a 3.5 out of 5.

Saman wrote:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Answer:
Most people avoid taking risks and they just try doing things [that] they already know how to do well. On the other hand, as far as I am concerned, the successful people are quite different [from] ordinary people, [as] they take risks and try new things in order to gain profit and achieve their goals.
First of all, trying to do new things give[s ] people [an] opportunity to find new ways [that] are different [from] traditional things.{avoid using "things" - here you could say "ideas"} Without changing the method of leaving {the method of leaving sounds odd, like going outside through a window instead of a door :) } and trying new things people cannot improve their conditions. For example, Columbus [was] a man [who] tried to go to India by a different way and he discovered [a] new continent. If he [had] t[aken] the ordinary path as other sailors [did] he could not [have] reach[ed] this great success. [Similarly,] Nowadays, we can see new modern computers, cell-phones and other inventions which help to improve the quality of living. Scientists and researchers use new and different ways to [invent new devices] and methods which can open new horizons in people’s li[ves].
Second, taking and trying new methods {"taking a method" sounds odd} and new things {innovations} are not always safe. We can find several examples of pioneers [who] endangered their li[ves] when tried to find new things or new methods. Marie Curie was a successful scientistwho discovered the radioactive element (Uranium) which made a huge development in science She exposed herself and her husband in front of the radioactive rays [unknowingly, ] which gave them cancer and they died by this disease. On the other hand, without taking the risk of trying new thing[s ] people cannot find new ways and cannot understand the advantages or disadvantages of new things. However, the successful people take this risk which the ordinary people do not. {maybe using an example of someone who took risks and died is not the best idea! }
[In] conclusion, trying new things give this opportunity to successful people to find out new horizons in their way to reach[ing] their goal and trying new ways [is] not safe all the time but without taking the risk of trying new things they cannot discover new ways. {this sentence is unorganized and sounds awkward} The successful people [take] the risk of endangering themselves in order to get the advantage of finding new [pathways, ] which the ordinary people do not do

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